The flying dog

The flying dog

On day I got a new dog then I went for walk then we where going up a Mountain So I was struggling to go up the mountain then the dog noticed I was strangling to go up the hill he started flying up the hill of cores he was struggling To fly he is the fattest dog on earth I did not realise he could fly then I had a hard a tack then he Dort me to the ground then he did spar which I did not now he could do today was weird

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  1. Hi Harry,
    Thank you for your post. I’m glad that the narrator can have such a special dog. In terms of your writing itself, it might be good to maybe pay more attention to the punctuation. Looking forward to your new work!

    Xuerong Huang (Team 100wc)

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